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[Blockhead: Episode 5]

very funny!

That was hilarious, no point, but thats what makes it FUNNY!

i only found a few errors,
1) On the school bus, one wheel had details the other didnt
2) when he was sitting on the couch talking to the fat guy, i think his arms were supposed to be at his sides but you could see the couch behind him (maybe you did that on perpous if you did my bad)

GOOD JOB

The-Swain responds:

I wasn't gonna make a big thing about it, but the tire-wheel thing was deliberate. I'll look for what you're talking about with arms and couches - my eyes aren't working so well right now. I haven't slept in thirty-something hours, so I'm bound to have missed something.

[Elevator Mishap]

good job

not bad, you have pretty good flash skills, and i was rotfl after that joke, litterally good job overall, i would strongly reccomend trying a long-term project, like i said, you have pretty goog flash skills

HalfV responds:

hey thanks and I am working on a longer project. Its my game of op unknown check it out on my site

[A Halo Short - Episode 1]

Good job

I like how you put the "Today's Lesson" in the end, its great, the animation was good too, but when the spartain (or spartan never read user manual) moves you could try to make it look better, otheriwse, GREAT JOB

AlfredoDoggy responds:

Thanks! ^^ I had to use frame-by-frame animation for when he stepped aside at the end. I tried tweening but for some reason the limbs went crazy.

[TTA Episode 030]

good job

this is pretty good, but youcould use learning how to make the characters look like they're talking, and not just moving their mouth, otherwise good

Kirbopher responds:

"WARNING, THIS IS AN EXTREMELY OLD MOVIE."