Fender-Bender's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SuperHero Status]

Legs?

I thought it was a good attempt at a first cartoon, but you need legs first :(

[Revenge Christmas]

That was a great one.

Good job, very nice work.
The only thing you could use improvement on is detail, Like when the reindeers are shitting... (that made me LOL)
Otherwise, that was great, this one is going on my favorites list!

[Blockhead: Episode 5]

very funny!

That was hilarious, no point, but thats what makes it FUNNY!

i only found a few errors,
1) On the school bus, one wheel had details the other didnt
2) when he was sitting on the couch talking to the fat guy, i think his arms were supposed to be at his sides but you could see the couch behind him (maybe you did that on perpous if you did my bad)

GOOD JOB

The-Swain responds:

I wasn't gonna make a big thing about it, but the tire-wheel thing was deliberate. I'll look for what you're talking about with arms and couches - my eyes aren't working so well right now. I haven't slept in thirty-something hours, so I'm bound to have missed something.

[Xtreme skiing]

good job!

that was funny, i had to watch it about 5 times lol. The only thing is that it would be cool if the main person was not a stick figure.

But overall, Great job

[the bill 'o' rights]

Good job!

this was great, i loved it, the backround music fit the mood perfectly, hilarious that was good, you deserve an A+

[Elevator Mishap]

good job

not bad, you have pretty good flash skills, and i was rotfl after that joke, litterally good job overall, i would strongly reccomend trying a long-term project, like i said, you have pretty goog flash skills

HalfV responds:

hey thanks and I am working on a longer project. Its my game of op unknown check it out on my site

[Icons Ep 2]

HILARIOUS

funniest thing ever, lol make more, there is nothing you need help with

[City of Angels Prologue]

pretty good, not bad

it was good, i would seriously consider watching the real thing. But you need to work on the characters lips, like many people do, try to make it look more like hes accually talking, and not like a puppet.
Good Job overall

[The Alphabet Song]

HAHA

that was funny, great job, if there was something you needed to work on, i would tell you but there's not! keep up the good work!

[A Halo Short - Episode 1]

Good job

I like how you put the "Today's Lesson" in the end, its great, the animation was good too, but when the spartain (or spartan never read user manual) moves you could try to make it look better, otheriwse, GREAT JOB

AlfredoDoggy responds:

Thanks! ^^ I had to use frame-by-frame animation for when he stepped aside at the end. I tried tweening but for some reason the limbs went crazy.